Well done Matthew. Well done 👌. Your presentation was very well thought out with good things to it and there a few flaws, so I will be very specific and picky with what your work could improve on. The first thing I recognized that should have room for improvement is your microphone was too LOUD and it hurt my ears when I listened to your presentation, so going forward, use a less sensitive microphone. Secondly, your voice could have had more enthusiasm and more feeling, for you are a news reporter and not say, a police dispatcher. Otherwise, your Powtoon came out pretty good 👌.
I thought you did a pretty good job on your presentation. You met all of the requirements on the rubric and answered all of the question that needed to be answered on it. I also like how you were pretty creative with some aspects of the powtoon. One thing I should mention though is that the way you talked into the mic made your voice way to loud. Over all though, you did great.
Your video was hilarious and your voice quality was good. One thing that I think would have made your presentation even better would have been to have more images and people in the video. Great overall though!
The narration was very loud but I like the news report. All of the information was there and the images matched your script fine. The presentation was fine.
I liked how you used a local news station for you presentation. You gave all the correct information. You needed to add a few different backgrounds to your presentation. The microphone was too loud and you could have added some color to the presentation.
Well done Matthew. Well done 👌. Your presentation was very well thought out with good things to it and there a few flaws, so I will be very specific and picky with what your work could improve on. The first thing I recognized that should have room for improvement is your microphone was too LOUD and it hurt my ears when I listened to your presentation, so going forward, use a less sensitive microphone. Secondly, your voice could have had more enthusiasm and more feeling, for you are a news reporter and not say, a police dispatcher. Otherwise, your Powtoon came out pretty good 👌.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a pretty good job on your presentation. You met all of the requirements on the rubric and answered all of the question that needed to be answered on it. I also like how you were pretty creative with some aspects of the powtoon. One thing I should mention though is that the way you talked into the mic made your voice way to loud. Over all though, you did great.
ReplyDeleteYour video was hilarious and your voice quality was good. One thing that I think would have made your presentation even better would have been to have more images and people in the video. Great overall though!
ReplyDeleteI like the story you had. You should and more words on the slides but you covered everything. Also maybe not have the music play as long
ReplyDeleteThe narration was very loud but I like the news report. All of the information was there and the images matched your script fine. The presentation was fine.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used a local news station for you presentation. You gave all the correct information. You needed to add a few different backgrounds to your presentation. The microphone was too loud and you could have added some color to the presentation.
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